WRITING SAMPLE

T3 WRITING SAMPLE  2014

NAME:  

GENERAL ATTITUDE QUESTIONS

(Replace the box that best suits you with a ✓ )

CUT AND PASTE THE TICK

Very Unlike Like Me Very

  Unlike                Me       Like Me

    Me

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01. I like writing at school       ☐                 ☐                 ☐                     ✓

02.  I am good at writing.                                                   ☐                 ☐                   ✓                ☐

03.  My teacher thinks I am good at writing.                     ☐                 ☐                     ✓                 ☐

04.  My mum and dad think I am good at writing.             ☐                   ✓                ☐                     ☐

05.  I enjoy writing in my own time (not at school).           ☐                    ✓            ☐                    ☐

06.  I am good at spelling.                                                ☐                 ☐                    ✓                   ☐

Caring for our Ocean

Many people are taking responsibility for the Ocean's future by reducing their impact on  it.

Write to describe one environmental problem and explain what people do to reduce its impact on the ocean.

As you explain what people do, write about how effective their actions are.

Think about:

• what your reader needs to know about the environmental problem
• how you are going to introduce the problem, the order of your ideas and how you link them?

Remember to:

• choose your words carefully
• take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
• edit – add or delete words or sentences to improve your work.

NAME: germain

START WRITING HERE: The ocean

When people throw there rubbish in the ocean it can cause pallution . When people litre all of the sae creatures could eat the rubbish . When people throw plastic bags in the sea the green turtles are going to think that they are jelly fish and the turtles are going to think that they are food and they also might choch on the plasice bag .  It is because sea turtles dont know what plasic bags nether do jelly fish know . People could throw can holder in the sea but the sea green turtles will mabey go threw the can holders and the can holders might squish the sea turtles shell and its body might look like an eight . If just one persone pees in the ocean it does not cause pallution but if every on in the world at the same time do it that does cause pallution because fish dont  like water like that . The fish would die pluse the sea animals provides us with food . If we keep litreing a flod could happen.  There are dangerouse sea animals in the ocean big sea animals they could wieght twice the size as a bus A sea creature could be stronger and better than a megalodon but they dont egsist anymore and now the king of the sea are whales sharks would of been the king of the sea only if the megalodon still egsisted .