I am a Year 5 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 4 and my teacher is Miss Kirsty.
Monday, 30 June 2014
Friday, 27 June 2014
MICHAEAL JACKSON
MICHAL JACKSON
when did he die
He died on june 25 2009
when did he start singing
He sang at the age of five .
When was he born
He was born on august 29 1958
what was his last song
His last song was the age of his death thats why he could not sing his last song .
1851 RUGBY BALLS
1851
Rugby balls
They used pigs bladder to pump up the rugby balls .
They were first made by richard lindon for schools .
Now they use a hand pump to inflate rugby balls .
In the olden days they say if you kick the ball around it could get raw germ laden pigs bladder .
Thursday, 26 June 2014
missing Wally
Dear miss ma’y,
I am writing this to you because our beloved family member wally the giraffe was taken by kidnaper.
He is sneaky and I am begging you to help us please.
Without him we would not have adventures with him and we would not have a wally draw to take out names .
So please can you help us.
Wally is important to the
class .
We got evidence but still no wally .
Hope you find him .
I would be amazed that you brought back wally .
THE
NEXT DAY
Kalo found evidence it was a picture of wally he was tied up in the hall.
Me Miss Kirsty and azure checked in the hall no wally
but there was a letter pind on the wall.
I was reading the writing to the class but I could not read it.
the writing was horrible and messy.
moderater
Writing Moderation Form MAY 2014
CHILD’S NAME: Germain
TEACHER: Kirsty Macfarlane
MODERATOR: _Kirsty _______________________ TOTAL SCORE: 23 LEVEL: __________
ELEMENT
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RUBRIC SCORE
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COMMENT
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RUBRIC SCORE
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COMMENT
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Ideas
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R3
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I think He is a R3 for Ideas because he writes a lot of Ideas about his topic
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Structure and Language
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R3
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I think Hes a R3 because He does His Beginnings Middle and End all about his topic.
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Organisation
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R4
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I think Hes a R4 because He’s improved His work in different ways.
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Vocabulary
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R3
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I think Hes a R3 because he can write small and big sentences that make sense.
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Sentence Structure
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R2
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In his sentence structure It is good but he got some words wrong.
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Punctuation
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R4
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Spelling
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R5
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Wednesday, 25 June 2014
END OF TERM
End of Term Reflection
Answer the following questions. Remember to write more than one word and to explain your answer.
1. What is something you have done this term that you are proud of?
I am proud of doing performing arts because I was playing ukulele. I was very happy because everyone was cheering.And when we were finished we went to go get a sausage sizzle and a drink.
2. Which subject do you enjoy the most? Why?
Reading because I learn other things about different cities. For example I learnt reading about italy how they build buildings and how to grow plants.
3. Which subject to you find hard? What do you find hard about it?
Mathes because I need to learn times tables and that are hard thing that I dont know and spelling words.
4. What is your favourite part of the day in our class? Why?
Art is my favourite thing in class. So I can be better at it and I can be an artest.
5. What have you taught a classmate to do?
I told one persone to show him how to listin to other techers so he learn and be on the dots.
6. How have you been a responsible member of Room 4?
I will do the right thing to show other people how to do it with the juniors.
7. What would you like to do differently next term.
I will behave myself and sit in a good place
like in the front were I can see what the teacher is doing so I can get better at it.
8. What would you like to write about in Term 2.
I will write about the exiting things that I have done and learnt in term 1 like about the war and north head when I started school and write about what I have don with my frinds.
ASSASINS
here is my free writing about assasins pirates, swords, and bouts.
Tuesday, 24 June 2014
our homophones
here is my daily five that we don. It is sight and site .
Friday, 20 June 2014
mentos and diet cola exspereiment
Hypothesis
I think a big exsplosion is going to happen and all that fizzy drink goes on our faces.
What we did:
First miss kirsty opened the lid then she put the funnel on. After that miss put the mentos in then she took off the funnel and walked back 2 steps back .
Observation :
I saw the bubbles fizz it looked like a waterfall the bubbles were kind of brownish and white . The coke was trying to be free. It lasted about 7 seconds. we put the last of the mantos in and nothing happened. We saw all the fizzy on the grass. We saw the mentos at the bottom. The grass was wet. And it was sticky all the grass was sticking to another piece of grass. Some of the grass were getting dirty because of the coke.
star fish have for lunch
What does a starfish eat?
School Journal Part 1 Number 2 1999
WALT: Find information in the text.
Use the book to fill in this table.
Where are they?
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What does it do?
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Insert a picture
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Suckers
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underneth the starfishes sthomach.
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walks by sucking every thing.
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Eyes
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the eyes are at the end of the starfishes arms.
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help to tell the difference beetween light and dark
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Spines
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the spines are at the top suckers.
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the spines are for pretection.
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Use the information to write down four facts about starfish:
They belong in a large marine animal called echinoderms.
They can regenerate different missing parts.
Tere bodey can be divided in five eaquel piecies.
Thursday, 19 June 2014
Wednesday, 18 June 2014
Tuesday, 17 June 2014
Our exsplain every thing
At mathes time we don our exsplain every thing work and my buddy was matthew but we used Ipads to finish our work and here is a video
Friday, 13 June 2014
Thursday, 12 June 2014
DEVIL JIN VERSES NARUTO
my daily five work. devil jin verses naruto
Monday, 9 June 2014
Quility comments
Hey these are all my comments that Ive don
1 comments:
- Germain said...
- GREAT JOB ON YOUR WORK
AND NEXT TIME PUT A SMILE ON YOUR FACE - Germain said...
- Hey starlyn I like the way that you Used full stops but next time It has to make sence
- Germain said...
- AWSOME WORK COOL MINECRAFT even thowe I havent played it
1 comments:
- Germain said...
- I like the way that you chose to do words that start with ool
New shoes for cloud
New shoes for Cloud
This task is about reading to find information.
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Read “New Shoes for Cloud’ then do the task below.
Focus on how Brent makes shoes for Mary-Ellen's pony.
The chart below shows the things Brent uses and what each thing is used for. Fill in the gaps in the chart. The first one has been done for you.
Things Brent uses
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What they are used for
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Cutters
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• Trimming the horse's hooves.
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Rasp
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• smoothing the horses hooves
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Forge
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• heating it up
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Hammer
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• ?
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Bucket of water
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• cooling it down
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Nails
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• makeing a hole
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Wednesday, 4 June 2014
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